Friday, April 29, 2011

Online Dangers Story: Revision by Averi Haugesag

            On Wednesday, April 20th, Eastview high school was alarmed to see what a sophomore student had posted on his Facebook wall as well as on his Twitter account. These posts  contained aggressive, eerie, and threatening meanings that the school administration just couldn’t look  past. The updates, speculated by those close to the student, were a result of a constant struggle with hurtful words and exclusive actions made by other students.
            Facebook and Twitter has become the bullet to many destroyed careers and educations. In Eastview’s case, the student was expelled and immediately brought to a detention center until the police department and the school’s administration could Take proper action.         After the incident, many students were unsure  how the situation had been resolved. The current status of what had happened was still a mysterious combination of online rumors and speculated ideas conjured up by ignorant high school students.
 “I didn’t know what to believe,” says senior Averi Haugesag. “I wasn’t so sure whether or not being at school was even safe.”
            The school was holding  information back from the students and the public until they could clearly determine the entire situation and produce a solid statement.
“There were so many versions of the story spreading around”, continues Haugesag “I had no idea what was truth and what I could forget about.”
The dangers of threatening posts can carry further than the poster had originally thought. What some see as harmless venting via the internet; can be interpreted as violent idealism by others.
 It is unsure to the students if what the boy said was the beginning of yet another act of violence against a school or if his only goal was to gain some much needed attention from anyone who would listen.
Many student’s skin crawled as they opened up the haunting twitter updates that read “Forgive me, God, for what I am about to do. I am going to bring the walls of Eastview crashing down.” As well as “It’s my birthday next week and all I want is for Eastview to disappear.”
Nobody knows for certain what the students intentions were, but with the help of the internet and a few discomforting posts, the student’s actions were immediately halted and the proper precautions could be taken.
 However, there is another side to the power of Facebook and Twitter. Diego Perez, a senior at Eastview, says that he knows someone who had been suspended for  three days  forburning a picture of a boy in the parking lot long after school had ended.
There was  a controversy over  whether or not this should be taken as a threat or just an act of teenage drama.
The fine line between what is considered harmless and what is seen as threatening is sometimes very hard to distinguish.
“I think students should have the right to express themselves online,” continues Perez. “The school administration should only become involved with what we say [online] when we endanger other people.”
The schools administrative leaders could not be reached for a statement due to conflicting schedules. They just want students to keep a sharp eye on what they say online so the question ‘Should we do something about what has been said’ doesn’t need to be asked in the first place.
Kids should watch what they post to avoid starting the conflict No one has time to deal with it and  a student doesn’t want to have something they said out of a temporary fit of anger or frustration stick with them the rest of their life.

Peer Review Post

I did a peer review of Averi Haugesag's (ahaugesag.blogspot.com) story about the zEUs Ultimate Frisbee Team.

I also did another of Diego Perez's (diegopereznews11.blogspot.com) story about an Eastview High School math teacher who seems to be a favorite amoung the students.

Thursday, April 28, 2011

Online Update Dangers

                On Wednesday, April 20th, Eastview high school was alarmed to see what a sophomore male student had posted on his Facebook wall as well as on his Twitter account. These posts carried aggressive, eerie, and almost threatening meanings that the school administration just couldn’t look passed. The updates, speculated by those close to the student, were a result of a constant struggle with hurtful words and exclusive actions made by other students.
                Facebook and Twitter have become the bullet to many destroyed careers and educations. In Eastview’s case, the student was expelled and immediately brought to a detention center until the police department and the schools administration could find the proper actions to take.
                After the incident, many students were unsure as to what the situation had resolved to. The current status of what had happened was still a mysterious combination of online rumors and speculated ideas conjured up by ignorant high school students.
 “I didn’t know what to believe,” says senior Averi Haugesag. “I wasn’t so sure whether or not being at school was safe.”
                The school was holding everything back from the students and the public until they could clearly determine the entire situation and produce a solid statement.
“There were so many versions of the story spreading around”, continues Haugesag “I had no idea what was truth and what I could forget about.”
The dangers of threatening posts can carry further than the poster had originally thought. What some see as harmless venting via the internet can be interpreted as violent idealism by others.
 It is unsure to the students if what the boy said was the beginning of yet another act of violence against a school or if his only goal was to gain some much needed attention from anyone who would listen.
Many student’s skin crawled as they opened up the haunting twitter updates that read “Forgive me, God, for what I am about to do. I am going to bring the walls of Eastview crashing down.” As well as “It’s my birthday next week and all I want is for Eastview to disappear.”
Nobody knows for certain what the students intentions were, but with the help of the internet and a few discomforting posts, the students actions were immediately halted and the proper precautions could be taken.
But there is another side to the power of Facebook and Twitter. Diego Perez, a senior at Eastview, says that he knows someone who was suspended for 3 days because she was burning a picture of a boy in the parking lot long after school had ended.
There was obvious conflict over if this should be taken as threatening or just an act of teenage drama.
The fine line between what is considered harmless and what is seen as threatening is sometimes very hard to discern.
“I think students should have the right to express themselves online,” continues Perez. “The school administration should only become involved with what we say [online] when we endanger other people.”
The schools administrative leaders could not be reached for a statement due to conflicting schedules. They just want students to keep a sharp eye on what they say online so the question ‘Should we do something about what has been said’ doesn’t even have to be asked in the first place.
Kids should watch what they post to avoid starting the conflict, because nobody has time to deal with it and no student wants to have something they said out of a temporary fit of anger or frustration stick with them the rest of their life.

Tuesday, April 26, 2011

Questions for my hard news story

Interviewee: Senior Girl
  • What did you think about the scare we had recently?
  • How did you hear about everything that had happened?
  • How did facebook and twitter play a vital role in getting the issue into the light?
Interviewee: Senior Boy
  • Have you ever seen or been a part of facebook causing issues that maybe had been blown out of proportion?
  • Is posting angry comments or tweets a way for students to vent or should they be taken more seriously?
  • When do you think the school administration should get involved with what kids say online?
Interviewee: Dr. Francino
  • How was the issue resolved?
  • What kind of precautions can be taken so that something like this doesn't happen again?
  • What criteria of judgment can students use to make sure that what they say online isn't in any way a threat?

Monday, April 25, 2011

Hard News Topic Idea 1

I'm am going to do a hard news piece on the dangers of posting something potentially threatening or dangerous on a social network.

Class Notes 4-25-11: News Story Criteria

Hard News Criteria
  • Should be +/- 600 words.
  • The first two sentences should include the "lead" which is just the 5 W's. Who? What? When? Where? Why? Then the story is the writer just expanding off of those topics.
  • Keep the writing clean and uncluttered. Give the readers the information that they need.
  • Weave the interviews tastefully into the body text.
Soft News Criteria
  • Usually +/- 600 words.
  • Is not time sensitive. Profiling people, companies, organizations, etc.
Feature
  • +/- 1,500 words.
  • Takes a step back from the headlines and takes a closer look at the issue at hand.
  • Usually very interesting to read.
  • Explores the more complex angles of a story more than just the what aspect of it.

Tuesday, April 19, 2011

Class Notes 4-19-11: Student Speech Rights

Student Speech Rights

1. What are the 5 freedoms of the 1st amendment?- Freedom of Speech
- Freedom of the Press
- Freedom of Religion
- Freedom of Assembly
- Freedom to Petition 

2. What is the Tinker Standard?
- Student speech cannot be cansored as long as it does not "materially disrupt class work or involve substantial disorder or invasion of the rights of others.
- It was the first trial that was in favor of the students.

3. What is the Frasier Standard?
- Because school officials have an "interest in teaching students the boundaries of socially appropriate behavior," they can censor student speech that is vulger or indecent, even if it does not cause a "material or substantial disruption."

4. What is the Hazelwood Standard?
- Censorship of student-sponsored student expression is permissible when school officials can show that it is "reasonably related to legitimate pedagogical concerns."

5. What is the Frederick Standard?
- January 2002, Olympic torch travels through town.
- Principal Morse cancels school.
- Senior Frederick unveils banner on the sidewalk across the street which reads "Bong Hits 4 Jesus".
- Suspended for 10 days.
- Since the students were on a "school authorized field trip", they were found guilty by the Supreme Court.

6. What is the definition of libel and slander?
- A published false statement that is damaging to a person's reputation.
- Libel: Written. Slander: Spoken.

Monday, April 18, 2011

Class Notes 4-18-11: What is Journalism?

Definition:
Define “Journalism” in 1-3 sentences.

I define journalism as the telling of current events that are newsworthy through newspaper, magazines, and the internet.

List and describe the six criteria of newsworthiness.

TITLE DESCRIPTION EXAMPLE
1. Timliness: it is current. (Ex: Sports scores from last night.)

2. Prominence: we care about famous people and things. (Ex: When Brittany Spears got a haircut.)
3. Proximity: we care because it's close to us. (Ex: Daily weather in Russia doesn't matter to me living in USA.)

4. Significance: the bigger the event, the more newsworthy it is. (Ex. The Japan earthquakes.)

5. Unusualness: we care about things that don't happen often. (Ex: Murders or house fires.)

6. Human Interest: feel-good stories. (Ex: Baby dolphin born at the zoo.)


What are the advantages of print journalism?
1. The stories go much more into detail.

2. You can control what you view.

3. You can take it with you.


What are the advantages of broadcast journalism?1. Much more current than print.

2. Being able to see and hear the story is much more powerful than reading about it.

3. Being able to get the news pretty much wherever you are because its mostly free.


Why has online journalism (convergent media) become so popular?

Because it takes the best of both types of journalism into one style of media.